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The frayed rose sky
Behind the hues
Of new red dyes
And silver dew
Drops far down
Far and few
Between the sounds
Of a purple muse

The fallen song
The muse does sing
Of the fractured rungs
She once did cling
Her tattered notes
Soft and sweet
Among the motes
Of her crumbled metes

Her humbled home
Beneath the earth
Fallen far from
Her former mirth
Now misplaced innocence
Lost trust, lost worth
In the eyes of prudence
At the impending birth
©2009 ~bleachrave
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Author's Comments

First piece submitted in a while....

I hate submitting poetry... I never know where to submit it.

It's not really Romantic... more post-romantic if anything.

And I don't know if this counts as fixed.... There's a structure to it, but not a structured that's been used by others famously....

Blah, whatever.

Title was difficult.


Anyway, tell me what you think.

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my friend thinks its pretty, it reminds of this book i've read.
and i think its wonderful also.

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haha, well, thank you and your friend. What book does it remind you of?

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:iconkiwi4850:
um don't ask me why but it reminds me of the great and terrible beauty series. my friend agreed with me. :)

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Great and Terrible Beauty series? Never heard of it, lol

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