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Stand in the wind
Look to the sky
Breathe in again
And wonder why

Winds are blowing,
Shifting, Changing
Breezes flowing,
Lives arranging

Carrying feelings,
Smiling, weeping
Clutching healings,
Pleading, seeping

Ever blowing,
Tough as stone,
Ever flowing
Softest tone

Stand in the wind
Look to the sky
Breathe in again
And wonder why

Gales are gusting,
Winding, weaving,
Currents thrusting,
Stirring, grieving

Cyclone swirling,
Spinning, fleeting,
Zephyrs twirling,
Drifting, beating

Never breathing,
Loud as silence
Never ceasing
Hushed defiance




Stand in the wind
Look to the sky
Breathe in again
And wonder why

Drafts are swaying
Singing, glazing
Tempests praying,
Calling, hazing

Typhoons ringing,
Crying, reaping
Flurries clinging,
Keeping, leaping,

Ever moving,
Fleet as life
Ever soothing,
Slow as strife

Stand in the wind
Look to the sky
Breathe in again
And wonder why

Never a whisper
Loud as a cry
Never a plea
Mute as the sky

Stand in the wind
Look to the sky
Breathe in again
And wonder why
©2007-2009 ~bleachrave
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Author's Comments

A poem about the wind... Written for an English project. Requirements: Synesthesia and/or Paradox.

I tried-ish to to both... :D

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:icontsukukeru:
Now THERE'S the good poetry I know you can do! xD

I loved it! Amazing rhythm and flow, really great word choices and imagery. ;)

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:iconmidnightfox21:
very amazing:clap:
i love the 14th stanza:heart:
great job!

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:iconbleachrave:
Hey, thanks a lot! :D And thanks for the fave! :)
:iconmidnightfox21:
you're very welcome:D
i like it a lot^^

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:iconumejey:
i liiike~ 8D

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:iconjoe021093:
I love this poem. You did a great job!

=D

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:iconbleachrave:
Thanks. For the comment and the fave. ^^

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